Scene Description

This is an old piece of writing but I want to share it with you because I am proud of the words that I have used in here. I have tried to describe well.

Writing task

Scene description

Wow there it is  an amazing sight with in my eyes. I see the sky is blue and green bushes to.That is how I like it all ways. I see a sandy shore it is all grainy. This is Paradise to me,I like being outside and swimming all kind of that stuff.I hear birds yelling their heads of they are so loud in a good way .I see native plants silver ferns everything. I feel green plants within my hands.I taste fresh water in my mouth.As I stare into the water it gazes back to me.I see long tree brunch with crystal green leaves going into the crystal clear water.I can smell freshness in my nose.There are all kinds of colours like blue green yellow, even gold. Now it is the sad time because I have to leave. Bye amazing sight.

Dancer of the week

Today one of the people at Parkvale School won dancer of the week. Her name is Jordan. She got the dancer of the week because she gave everything a go even when it was hard. Here she is with her prize. Well done to all the people that came to dance club. Hope you get it next time!

Square

This is a prove it that I did after going to a workshop about measuring out a square metre.
Workshop Prove It

I learnt how to do a square metre

Here is an example:  

All even sides

Straight

1 metre  each side

Hope you have a lovely day to all and be proud of your self for your own work.

My learning tasks

In Rimu hub we have prove it so the teachers know what we get and don't get. I am going to show you how to do one.

Workshop Prove It

I learnt...

Here is an example:

This is what it looks like when you first get it and this is what it looks like once you have finished it

Workshop Prove It

I learnt how to use a ruler

Here is an example:

  I have finished it 


What good about prove its is that your teacher can see all your work with out asking you to see your work and it is very fun and easy to do- once you have done the learning of course!